After 20 years, I’ve rewritten the Verdurian reference grammar.
The main motivation was my syntax book. I want to be able to tell conlangers how modern syntax can deepen your conlang, and I figured I should make sure I have a really good example.
Now, you’ll see that I did it without drawing a single syntactic tree. That never seemed to be necessary, though I do have some discussion of transformations, and I mark subclauses and talk about underlying forms. The main influence of modern syntax is in adding more syntactic stuff, and thinking more about how things interrelate.
To put it another way, if you don’t know much modern syntax, you’ll write one relative clause and call it a day. But once you’re familiar with syntax, you start to think about what you can relativize, and how nonrestrictive relative clauses work, and headless clauses, and what’s the underlying form for headless time clauses, and such things.
I also took the opportunity to add glosses to all the examples, provide a new long sample text, redraw the dialect map, add new mathematical terminology, add pragmatic particles, and in general update the presentation to how I write grammars these days. I also html-ized the Verdurian short story I translated long ago. And subcategorize all the verbs in the dictionary. And provide margins.
FWIW, though much of the content is similar, it’s all been rewritten– I very rarely simply copied-and-pasted. Plenty of little things have been added, and some old bits removed. (E.g. the descriptions of the dialects, which I hope to expand on in more detail.)
An example of a little change: the morphology section no longer goes case by case, a method that makes it hard to look up forms. And I changed the expository order to nom – acc – dat – gen, which makes it easier to see when the nom/acc forms are the same. (If it’s good enough for Panini, it’s good enough for me.)
Verdurian is still not my favorite language (that would be “whatever language I created last”), but the problems are mostly lexical. And it’s a little too late to redo the vocabulary yet again. At least I can say I’m pretty happy with the syntax now…